Short and snappy. Was a decent read. Need to up the amount of words and syllables you are rhyming. Also fill in more of the box for a more impactful cypher.
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-02 12:40:00

Very poetic
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-02 13:29:40

what Bape said... but it was a good read... fill that box up w/ more of that... fair rate...
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-08-03 12:45:59

Very poetic but def could of been longer. Fair rate in yo
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-08-24 21:28:14

I'm sure you were just flowing and trying to get ideas out in the open. If so I like where you seemed to be going with this, reminds me of kendrick lamar in a way. Keep it up bruh
Rated: 5

Posted on: 2017-09-05 18:53:29