Nice again. Seems a little rushed though, take your time with it and maybe elevate the amount syllables you are rhyming. Fairs.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-05-11 14:44:49

rhyming was cool could use some polishing in areas keep workin bro
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-05-13 11:26:39

Cool
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-05-13 23:20:33

Dope cypher. Off preference I really liked this
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2017-05-14 15:05:56

Continue takung your time. You're getting betta. This was Rather Dope
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2017-05-14 15:27:28

What bapee said basically
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2017-05-14 16:45:54

Don't quit
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2017-05-16 01:47:47

It's a good message but try to take your time and really polish up some spots that need work. Work in some longer multisyllablic flows. Keep it up
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-05-20 06:51:46

Liked the overall feel of this verse ...work on your structure bruh
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2017-09-12 18:32:12