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Nice little cypher, had some decent rhymes in here. Still room for elevation so keep grinding.
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2017-05-11 09:41:12
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Really not saying a whole lot. Reminds me of something in my poetry book from when I was a kid. Keep workin. You'll get there.
Rated: 5 Posted on: 2017-05-11 10:06:39
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Cool
Rated: 6 Posted on: 2017-05-13 23:21:44
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Would of been a higher rate if utilized the box a bit more. All in all dope cypher for what it is. Fair rate!
Rated: 6 Posted on: 2017-05-14 15:14:35
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Its an interesting little cypher, but your ideas and statements are all over the place and hard to follow. Put some more effort into writing a full 16 as well. Keep it up you'll get there.
Rated: 5 Posted on: 2017-05-21 00:18:41
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