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Damn this was crazy, alot if stand out bars, expecially that Seattle Defense ish, anyone who watchs football knows that D manhandeled teams this year
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-01-22 00:53:29
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Aiiight this was a smooth freestyle here. A couple of stand out lines I like... The make up maybaleen and construction worker bar was ill. Keep it up. Fair rate.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-22 03:49:13
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not a bad one, was a good read, just a fair rate. keep it it
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-22 09:50:39
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Good shit here. Do some more. A 32 next time
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-01-22 10:34:33
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g'shit
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-22 13:14:14
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Dope Shit
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-22 13:24:53
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Construction workers line was my favourite. I thought the 'shit feels light' line was gonna end with 'tight' but you ended it with ice which was good as it wasn't what I expected.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2014-01-22 16:58:50
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Doope Shit...the flow and everything were just Sick Keep killin it
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-01-23 08:36:51
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Solid cypher, Punchline-centric. I digg it, "Construction Workers" line was my fav... Nice drop tho #FreeGrizz #s'MURDA
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2014-01-23 17:20:58
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Some good metaphor attempts which could be turned into punchlines with a bit of work. The rhyming was alright with the exception of the broken "STAY CLEAN" and "MAY-BA-LEEN" one. Keep working on them. I know this was a quick freestyle but it can still be good practise to get a little bit of structure together. Also, why would you want to free someone who's banned for cheating?
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2014-01-24 07:51:45
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FV
Posted on: 2014-03-01 07:10:47
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