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Posted on: 2013-07-29 23:31:31

not that good at battle rapping so i dont know why i even tried out or why im here but oh well still dropped something not like i'll get in :)
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-07-30 02:38:50

keep elevatin guys.you ll be dope .if you need help hit me up. n check him out he's got tutorials helps alot. http://www.letsbeef. com/forums/showthrea d.php?p=916104#post9 16104
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-07-30 11:28:53

Aiiight guys, this is the 4th edition of the GOL audition, special thanks to Ruthless the captain of GOL for hoisting this again.... Leftswifty, I see u got heaps of potential to grow, u flow well and I can see u understand multi rhyme... I like to see u try to break ur verse up into bars, each bars with 2 lines and rhyme scheme can be all the same or different. I rate ur verse 7.2/10 qualify to join the crew.....Plain, I like that lil verse u put up, it's consistent and flow aiiight throughout, u too understand multies, I see ur verse being very cypherish and topical, like to see u try out some battles too. Also ur metaphors and vocab is quite good. Like to see u put this into punch format 7.5/10 qualified... Andresimon, I'm impress with ur spit, u custom ur verse to suit the crew try out. And mentioning slogan then reference it with the movie olympus.. Good shit, also the computer line was cool about Mac and lag lol... I think u shown creativity which is a good thing. One thing u need to work on is ur rhyme scheme and Multi games but that can be worked on easily. Ur concept is there 7.4/10 qualified.......baby Nats, u went free for all here flowing away spitting freestyle on top of ur head, ok it's nice but I like to see u thinking about concepts and working on ur multi rhyme too. good attempt. 6.1/10 I like to give u another shot by dropping 1 bar on the comment showing u understand multies rhyme......ok argonex, u showed some battling material here good shit to see some fire in here Though ur rhyme was all single syllable, u too need to work on ur Multi rhyme but that can be achieved once u try it out a few more times, also break ur verse up into bars, two line per bar and try to end it with a meaningful punch.. 7/10 just qualified... Overall the best try out by far... Keep it up guys, 
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-07-30 18:12:12

%100 A+
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-08-03 22:01:03

Gs
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2014-03-26 03:17:42