Good shit, Caked! May the best Poet win.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-08 21:05:43

I felt Obey had a better grasp on the poetry & what to accomplish. Better imagery, wording, & structure. Cak3d you shouldn't be trying to tell a story with a lot of details & specifics. You want a vague idea that comes with a clear picture, if that makes sense? Vote for... Obey.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-08 22:47:23

Not even being partisan coz of the AC thing, but Cak3dOut hasn't even kept to 10 syllables a line, and even that was overstretching the meaning of a Haiku. It should be a win by default for Obey.

Posted on: 2013-01-09 16:02:26

Agree with Book here, my vote goes to: Obey
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2013-01-09 16:04:15

^Just noticed that lol. My apologies. Cak3d is DQ'd. Obey advances.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-09 16:54:02

What after said..// GONZO vote
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2013-01-10 01:01:46

I can get with Obey
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2013-01-12 21:04:17