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Good shot and good luck bro.
Posted on: 2013-01-06 19:19:02 
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Good spar boys, AC's gettin deep!
Posted on: 2013-01-06 19:56:17 
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Shit*
Posted on: 2013-01-06 19:59:05 
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Damn, I liked both. I liked Jam's 2nd and 3rd line..and I liked Fayz's 1st line and second..but to me The 1st one was a lil simple than the rest for JamJar, and the opposite with Fayz's...I felt his 3rd line was a lil off and comes off a lil weird but liked the vocab in it. Good shit, can't wait to see who wins it. Gave it a 9
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-01-06 20:13:47 
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Good
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-07 00:55:02 
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Jam Jar skilled this one. The challenger Fays would have done well if a different word was replaced for scorches or even better if living water was replaced for River of life. Good Haikus from both tho.
Posted on: 2013-01-07 02:47:54 
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Nice shit yall.. LC all day
Posted on: 2013-01-07 07:53:28 
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good JJ and fayz is on form
Posted on: 2013-01-07 09:08:58 
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Jar got nasty, I felt that one on impact, G'shiii fellas
Posted on: 2013-01-07 12:24:14 
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Do we do expo's on this shit? lol
Posted on: 2013-01-07 14:40:04 
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Part of haiku is that it should leave more unanswered questions, but tantalise.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-07 15:04:50 
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I feel you
Posted on: 2013-01-07 15:29:57 
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Damn there's alotta dope writers in this tourney, my vote goes to: JamJar
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-08 17:32:57 
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Jam came with some good imagery here. He painted a great picture. Fayz also came with a good image but he didn't come to a good ending. His Haiku ended with me feeling like it was missing something. So my vote goes to Jam.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2013-01-08 22:44:35 
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eek..... Jamjar
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2013-01-10 16:24:42 
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camsn flash
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2013-01-10 23:02:42 
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