Damn this was nice. amazing flow and multies, vocab was on point. and I feel for poor jack. #FREEJACK
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-04 19:02:26

LOL! Jack's fucked man.. #FREEJACK
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-04 19:03:43

This was nice homie you got a real nice imagery. feelin this part the most: Jack was scared, the grip was tight like a vice he shivered ‘n’ he trembled // Jack clenched his fist, closed his eyes, then hit him in the temple // The teacher fell like jacks grades since being in his class. He was dead.. // and when the authorities asked, the students said.. // Jack provoked the teacher, and struck him in the head.. But ye man real talk good shit
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-12-04 19:50:25

Great imagery. Told a really great story through the art of rap.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-12-04 19:56:37

This was a real interesting read, enjoyed this one forreal, you could be a problem in topical battles, dime.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-05 09:56:59

woah. i felt like i could see every bit of this happnin..shit was dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-06 16:46:35

Appreciate the rates guys! Felt good to drop my first cypher!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-06 17:22:23

hahaha the teacher had it comin'... i liked this, and i cosign with AT, it reminded me a lot of the stuff i was reading in the topical tourney. it had a good rhythm to it and a good story. shit you could even throw in a chorus after that and then start a new verse about jack's experience in juvey. i gave it an 8

Posted on: 2012-12-07 21:45:24

I got a notification saying you rated it a 0 Dirty.. lol.. had all 10's now the stars gone down :/.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-08 08:28:36

hah nice write fam.dimed.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-09 18:06:24

not bad kiddo
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-12-10 04:07:35

nice
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-12-12 16:03:04

Very very nice. The dialogue in there felt authentic - could easily connect to that situation. Keep it burning.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2013-01-02 21:22:11