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sounds eerie
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-10-04 07:58:22 
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great cypher...homie
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-10-09 11:45:47 
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some nice imagry here bro,
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-10-11 04:43:38 
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Great cypher, creepy though
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-10-15 07:55:49 
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You Suck...haha im kidding great cypher dude keep doing ya Thing n congratz for ur new Crew
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-10-17 04:58:50 
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This cypher is dope. Hit me up when you make part two. This "story" was gettin' super good. I enjoyed it. Props
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-10-17 05:26:53 
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Nice bit of storytelling here, wish it was longer. Agree with Osa, putting it on wax would be a good idea once extended. Stay up fam./
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-10-24 06:35:40 
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better than i was expecting it 2 be 2bh. nice work
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2012-10-25 11:03:24 
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This was a good read. painted a picture......a very dark twisted poetic picture
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-25 21:54:06 
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good shit homie... i dig dat dark shit.... we should collab up if you can record.... i think i got a beat that this would be dope on..... real shit
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-27 03:02:54 
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nice read fam
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-10-27 03:19:41 
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damn good all around fam keep it up!!
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-10-28 10:30:36 
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I liked this a lot.. You built a real strong atmosphere for the reader! Keep it up..!! Make this a song!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-11-07 11:14:03 
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damn. this was good / read it twice. i like tha last 3-4 lines the best. keep it up
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-11-30 11:05:30 
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Damn famo thats some straight up goosebumps shit, started off kinda slow but im glad i gave it a full read. giving an 8. some work coulda been done but all around a good one.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-11-30 15:32:02 
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A few rhyme and syllabic complications but awesome imagery.
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-11-30 16:52:03 
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this was pretty good mang
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2012-12-01 14:48:00 
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good shit
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2012-12-04 03:32:48 
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Certain words you used is what impressed me most. Inspired me to write my own cypher.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2012-12-08 06:49:05 
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fair rate
Rated: 1 Posted on: 2012-12-16 05:21:22 
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I fuck w/ it, good storytelling n use of vocab. Flow wasn't really there in spots but it worked. Stay at it.
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-01-23 03:07:29 
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That is DOPEE almost exactly like what im workin on
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2013-02-02 00:27:35 
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tbh,some of your bars didnt rhyme like the first one...vocab was decent and imagery was nice.
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2013-05-06 19:59:15 
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