Not my cup of codeine but i think i was good...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 00:37:54

Damn that was a beauty ya'll - Sonny and Cher of LB 10 all day -true poetry - props ++
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 00:55:41

Kunii: As We Feel Our HEART CONNECT!!Piercing Through Like DARTS HAVE MET!! /This bar seems a bit short, throwing off the flow imo. Put in a few more words within that bar to complete it & it'd be good./ Together We Will DIE KISSING LIPS!!No Good BYE WITH SINKING SHIPS{Titanic}!!!As We Dance And FLY SWINGING HIPS!!Oh MY DREAMING SLIPS!! / again I think you left out some words and if everything didn't seem so short it'd be aight. Try to make everything flow together so it's not so choppy sounding nah mean./ As You HELD MY HAND!!!Iam "Cinderella" In A CELL OF LANDS!!I've SMELLED A MAN!!So SWEET AS FLOWERS WITH A TAG!!!His Finger Is Raw Holding Da Sword Like MEAT IS SOUR IN A RAG!!His Blood Runs Quick Disappearing Like BEATING FLOUR IN A BAG!! /Now I don't know what you were trying here tbh. no hate just ..idk./ History Of Love BEYOND RIVERS!!!The Kids Says Eww And The YOUNG SHIVERS!!!As Lightening Strikes Down My Back My TONGUE QUIVERS!!For The Word"SPRUNG DIFFERS"!!RUNS QUICKER!!We Have Never Met Like NUNS AND LIQUOR!!In Ancient Egyptian Times DRUMS ARE THICKER!!History And Love Shall Grow And Flow Like GUNS AND TRIGGERS!!Our Grave Is Ment For 2 Like Big PUN IS DA DIGGER!! / This was probably the best of your verse. Some good multis and you didn't leave out a bunch of words. Overall not bad. Just remember to make your bars flow together and watch your wording. Imma get to Phen's here in a min.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-06-09 01:01:29

Phen: These poetic scriptures resembling THOUGHTS N FEELINGS overflowed for her broken heart only to pay the COST OF HEALING. / I liked this. It's on point imo. / meaning her past left her for dead so i GAVE HER A FUTURE i told her what it was and she seen my aim like LASERS ON RUGERS / Yo I liked to ''past left her for dead/gave her a future'' part but I'm not feeling the gun talk for this. / yes bury us as one LIFE, THATS A LOVE PAIR heaven or hell it dont matter cuz we'll meet RIGHT BACK UP THERE / I liked this too. Good shit. / i traveled far to SEEK THE RIGHT ONE and what i found out was that shes the 1800 to my glass and the WEED TO MY BLUNT /Wasn't really feeling this. multies were a bit off. I like the weed to my blunt concept though. / who thought wanted to GIVE UP WOULD CHANGE but i came to realize i dont wanna know how it feels to MISS A GOOD THING / It's okay. Nothing great, wording is a bit weird but nice concept. / and they say you never miss your water til your WELL RUNS DRY but thats irrelevant cuz i got enough water to leave HELL TONGUE TIDE / Wasn't too sure what you meant by tongue tide but I liked this start. Overall good shit man. Keep it up.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-06-09 01:10:08

-Madvervbs That Was Madd Rude. You Aint Here To Critique. This is Not a Battle. Fucc Outta Here. 10 My niggas
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 02:41:22

Good shit both of yall. 10s to both mcs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 14:12:06

Feedback helps. It's better then being fake and giving this a 10. No hate to either of you, if you took it as me being rude my bad. Really was only trying to help ya'll out nah mean.
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2012-06-09 17:59:13

I dont mind feedback cuz theres nothing anyone can say that can hurt or help me..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 18:05:44

dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-06-09 22:10:07

I like this.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2012-06-10 08:15:25