Not bad at all!! Just gotta work on your delivery and on your flow but other then that you better then most people I have heard on this site!! lol

Posted on: 2014-04-14 20:44:28

It's provocative. I'm trying to understand the entirety: "some people get it": preamble to next line "couldn't live without a little stumblin', trippin, and with one slip I'm in a predicament": Fro m later lines I'm not sure if the emcee is affronted because somebody made a mistake, or because he considers himself to have made one. "[about blunts]": the stress from someone slipping gets the emcee to smoke weed? "got this bitch trying to fuck with business." [somebody fucking with a bitch] that the emcee won't let happen. Is someone hitting on the emcee's girl or sister or something? is the emcee a pimp? what's up? "I ain't writin' letters": the emcee feels that no explanation is necessary, that the fault should be obvious in itself? it's provocative. I like the drawl. But I struggle with comprehension.

Posted on: 2014-06-30 01:46:04

Decent. I feel like you're trying to have the style of Lil Wayne. I don't really care for that too much, Don't try and swag jack someone or use the same style they have, have your own and be yourself. Other than that, the bars was decent, the flow was aiigh.. It is what it is.

Posted on: 2014-09-06 11:03:27

Love your verse bro!

Posted on: 2014-09-24 21:41:49

How the fuck does this work, how to add my verse.

Posted on: 2015-02-16 23:29:03

dopey

Posted on: 2015-02-19 17:55:41

I rate this cypher as a 6 because it's decent¢@letsbeef cypher 2twoo emcees they did aiigh buht I'm rate this cypher as a 4
Rated: 4

Posted on: 2019-03-30 04:48:02

This shit was fire.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2019-04-27 14:29:10

COOL I LIKE IT
Rated: 5

Posted on: 2019-05-14 22:09:08