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Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-08-09 02:23:27
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123 i see you firl
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 02:50:03
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only reason i dimed this is beccause of the message...the bars where light...and tha dog is a limp dick faggot...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 03:15:27
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tha' message was dope...really feelin tha first verse "if you wanna make a statament come OUTSIDE AND TALK instead you cause a body to be OUTLINED IN CHALK they need to learn a lesson so it's ABOUT TIME THEY TAUGHT but these fuckers never learn WITHOUT TIME IN COURT." Tha second one was hard ta read but had the vocab on point but missed the concept completely apparently.. Overall I was diggin it.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 17:27:43
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the 8 is for "potential.. lemme give you my piece. SUBLIMINAL: for such a broad context (mindless violence), you had alot more room for 'creativity', because you took the darker approach. And ya multies n flow were as dry n basic as it gets. Good idea for the cypher tho. THA DOG: I actually kinda liked your rhymes.. I listen to alot of Rhyme Asylum and you seem to have a similar flow. You shoudl be learning how to strain strong multies together for a technical style, plus your concepts were on a 2nd level. Going above the bare minimum is a problem though; You need to at least put in stanzas or some form of punctuation.
Nice try though boys, anyone wants more info or they disagree, just message me IN MY INBOX.. there's potential. ~Waxx
Rated: 8 Posted on: 2011-08-09 18:00:58
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yo famo dope drop. liked what u talkin bout.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 18:53:32
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tha dog was wack as fuck...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 20:06:52
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good drop 123...dog 6too
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-09 20:58:36
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Imma give 10 for the message cuz i can relate to this too. But Dog - A bit more work fam, you just gotta cap your rhymes for starters.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-09 21:56:03
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the in and outs of this cypher wre insane, good concept n damn it flows nice! fv 10's all around
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-10 07:28:32
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good drop y'all!!
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-10 19:43:15
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GOD DAMN...this Cotton Material..here//dope 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-10 20:44:03
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Mh Mh Mh
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-10 21:56:41
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good drops, fv
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-11 02:36:57
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9
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2011-08-12 02:31:12
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Cotton brothers
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-12 16:29:17
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gs
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2011-08-18 22:46:06
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