Shit you RAW!!we need to cyrher

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:02:08

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Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:02:25

Decent flow, good story. I enjoyed the read. You should peep my cypher "Blindstyle" lol
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:02:52

good yo, real good... what crew were you in before Lyricism?
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:05:27

enjoyed the read... some real shit.. good stuff here..
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:08:01

With a bit of polish... dude could be a major problem. I'll drop a lil critque instead of just gassing and diming. Your style is real fresh and you have some real clever lines that require some thought, i'd say tho to just think your your wording a lil more and try not to be too vague in certain lines. And mah fucka this needed to be 16+ lines! :violent: that said... dimed :D ifuckswithit.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:19:40

wow this is a very dope cypher!!!10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-11 06:42:44

nice dude... I liked it a lot. dime. I like that statue of liberty line.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-11 13:58:43

co-sign rule but diming away, a lot of whats written here touched home with me(ask rule this is real talk) style i love. concept was well done im intruiged to see where you gunna go makes me wanna write a cypher. awesome best cypher i read in a while props
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-11 16:13:13

some aight shit here...agree wit rule
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-11 16:43:41

Nice drop bro, i like it
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-11 17:49:43

Not bad, could use some touch ups..
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2011-04-12 00:30:43

Pretty good!
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-12 02:55:59

I think it's a dime. I think it'd be even doper if you turned it into a 16 and went deeper and more personal into your life. Idk bro, I think an 8 is fine, just do a part 2. =D
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-12 04:16:23

nice read, couple cats already break it down for ya. i must say i agree with them...you're already a problem.. tossin a dime..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-12 05:44:41

hot
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-13 01:01:07

Nice shit fam...all im gonna say is work an ya flow a bit...still...spitti n the fire homie.. 10z!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-13 01:12:35

He Just Cant Drop His Weird Style... Cough I Meant... Nice Read ....Expo? Aight Uh Your Cypher Had A Bad Stain Of Battling In It Which, Without, Would Have Made It A Much Better Read
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-13 11:03:51

very very nice
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-13 17:02:16

Dope read fam, the ending was nice.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-13 23:49:14

Love abstract pieces. I agree with Rule...polish up some areas...tighten up in a few places and you'll be an even bigger problem for this site.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2011-04-14 00:05:29

Sick Perfect name for it too nice drop
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-14 00:47:16

yea i was feelin this yo, had some good lyrics 4real. 10 this was raw
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-14 01:28:48

hot shit, poetic n what not, dime
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-14 07:54:04

straight dope homie dimed
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-14 10:58:41

not to bad, some of it was pretty decent and had a nice flow.. but i find the multies off point... Honesty vote
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-14 11:32:49

ok
Rated: 6

Posted on: 2011-04-14 23:19:00

nice read but agree with rule
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2011-04-15 00:18:18

shits fresh homie, keep it up. nice drop
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-04-25 23:19:04

shit was mad tight playa
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2011-07-29 07:43:58

really a gud shit b..!!

Posted on: 2011-09-06 04:28:51

10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-07-04 18:45:16