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IM TRYIN DAMNIT!! HAHAH. TRYIN TO GET THIS AUDIO THING DOWN GOTTA WORK ON MY FREESTYLE FIRST. HOLLA LATAZ!!
Posted on: 2010-01-14 20:51:03
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TIPS ARE WELCOME ANY ADVICE AS WELL.
Posted on: 2010-01-14 20:55:12
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so by the sound of it im guessing this is written, good shit though try and work on that flow if i had a mic id lay it down... workin on it
Posted on: 2010-01-14 23:14:53
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well maybe not written... now that i listen twice just sounded like you were trying to fit some words in or somethin
Posted on: 2010-01-14 23:31:45
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lil somethin somethin for yall, first audio, flow was off n i was off beat at some parts, some was written some was me trying to freestyle a bit, you should be able to tell written from freestyle in it tho, Duces, Please give feedback if you can.
Posted on: 2010-01-14 23:34:16
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the last part where i talk about nines is written, i took a brain shit. haha. but the first half straight off the dome. im workin on my whole style wit it tho. i wanna come thru audio and destroy. but mos def gotta get a mic trout. and lay down a fam cypher. hot drop flow keep it up.
Posted on: 2010-01-14 23:47:00
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anonomys pretty good homie try and change up the rhyme scheme at times and and make the lyrics fit to the beat so you might have to change the rythm of how it was first written just you know to add variety... keep it up
Posted on: 2010-01-15 01:52:05
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