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Very nice concept. A very courteous gesture to spit some real shit that means something in your departure. Your delivery is decent..it becomes a little rugged tho thru certain points in the piece. I would say to begin working on (multi)-syllable rhymes..You got the drive to thrive...if ya stay consistent with the intention of improving your writing, then you can do great things thru this rhythmic art. The realest shit u spoke was.......ere in the future success is what you'll receive//im telling you, you can do whatever it is you set your mind to you just gotta believe//but don't ever let your ambition rest...ive seen to many peoples carers end up in death//cuzz success happen to hang'em up bye the back of there necks... destroy cats in battle raps and watch as they fall to there feet//now i kno many feel they're the best but sometimes even the best have to expect defeat correct?????......DY MEZ...Revival of UE COMING SOON!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-08-01 01:26:30 
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