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ten. these sound WAY more like audio verses...still a good read for text...would be interested in hearing this on a beat though...i think it would work well...the hook could use some work though
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 15:43:02
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Hook could use some re wording but i like how you guys set it up...the verses are both nice a little stretched bar here and there but nice...9
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2009-06-23 16:09:25
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10 no doubt i liked 1/2 man 1/2 amazings verse more... had more rhyme
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 16:11:41
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10 no doubt i liked 1/2 man 1/2 amazings verse more... had more rhyme
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 16:11:41
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10 no doubt i liked 1/2 man 1/2 amazings verse more... had more rhyme
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 16:11:41
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MY DREAMS ARE LUST...JUST A BIG BUSTY WITH A PHAT OL BUTT...BUT THE PUSSY HAD DUST (COKE)...SO TO ADJUST TOOK HER CUM FROM DIAPHRAGMMS TO SYRINGES...HER AND OL DUDE STOOD UP ALL NIGHT MAKING LOVE FELT LIKE COCAINE BINGES...DIFFERENT FROM MOST BITCHES SHE REALLY ABOUT DIGITS...SHE'S A TEN ON THE DIGITAL SCALE MAKING WHOLE SELLS...YO THIS AIN'T MY CYPHER BUT F*CK IT OH WELL...NOT A PRISON SONG BUT AS MANY BARS AS A JAIL CELL...NO BAIL 30 YEAR BID TELL MAX.B I'LL SEE HIM IN HELL...WHILE MY BITCH GETTING SNORTED BY NIGGAS THE NUMBERS ARE SURREAL...HER TITS ARE FAKE BUT THE SATISFACTION IS FOR REAL...CLADDED IN QUILS (coke)...SHE'S HOT BUT SHE STILL CHILLS... "Yo I'm done I just wanted to write something down 4 myself you dig you holla back"
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 17:57:18
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solid 9 pieces...both...mult ies very nice..lenght is good..but keep on the flow..not to tell u how to do u..do ya thing yall..nice..9s
Rated: 9 Posted on: 2009-06-23 19:01:58
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Give y'all two 5's. Clap your hand and get a 10. Vote back on my 25th anniversary ~*~Legend Was Here~*~
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-23 22:36:55
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DyMeZ. Nice Material!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-24 08:25:16
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Gd Drops; Nice enough Multies
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-24 22:03:11
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