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Needs some work i think but expo on and advice with rateing plz
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-04 16:31:11
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~7~....gonne give it that cause the structure was a lil off....iss not that complex....Imma give you my advice...
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2009-06-04 16:56:56
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the vocabulary wasn't really the right selection..I guess if deepness an real talk is what you was goin for then you need a lil deeper straight to the head an heart hittin words....just my opinion....you asked for the advice so Im droppin it for ya
Rated: 7 Posted on: 2009-06-04 16:59:26
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thankx homie^
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-04 17:09:19
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8 not better than the other one but still good
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2009-06-04 18:18:09
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