It was almost like she held a BLADE TO MY *THROAT* WHEN/ Typo, Whatever lol...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 08:10:07

This was nice. Another solid different plot. Haha. 10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 08:14:10

Oh yeah, peep mine back.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 08:14:20

Dang, I hope this ain't real talk man, crazy spit.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 08:40:32

nice, ten shit, vote back on mine
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 10:19:07

Nice verse, 10. no downfalls to speak of, good story.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 10:25:02

that was nice homie i like the emotions you put in there 10, ~ THE REGIMENT ~.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 10:39:59

THIS IS COOL!!! BUT I STILL WANT THAT CANDY BAR MAYNEAK!!! I DONT FOR GET SHIT LIKE THAT!!! WHUT?
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-10 12:19:52

Coolio.
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2009-04-11 05:05:53

10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-13 04:10:13

this is sick man you get a 10 from me
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-13 12:06:24

dam hotter then any1s cypher on the topical tourney yet.... this shiit had flow, and was lyrical ...throw the benjamins on this.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-13 12:33:59

Nice...8
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2009-04-15 01:16:15

Ohh Pretty Nice Cypher Mayneakkk!! Its Ah 1 From Me =) .... Lol!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-15 19:48:42

Damn this is def. worth a dime! hahaha the first 5 lines were funny...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-15 20:53:20

I low rating but its cool...Hit it up people...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-15 21:26:04

Maaan Some Of These Comments , Are Either Retarded Or they Never Read It .... The Flow Was So Ill On This 1 May hahaha , I was Like Whoaaa When ... "She got me sprung, Now im CRAZY DEVOTED It was almost like she held a BLADE TO MY THOAT WHEN/ Her Voice suddently FADED WHEN SPOKEN, she said: “Im Really sorry, Its not your BABY IM HOLDIN"!!…/" .... Damnnnnnnnnn I'd Flip .. It's a 10 Bud
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-15 22:03:45

10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-15 22:56:01

im diggin it its a good topic i felt you on it i was in the story... "Emotion ARCHED INNA RYHME,SPARK TO GET HIGH “refusing” Nothin, my Future STARTS TO “DECLINE”!../ Priva te life now KNOWN AROUND THA BLOCK so I put word out for people to TONE IT DOWN A NOTCH/ now “she wants to leave me(?)”, loves an "american football" tha way it's "THROWN AROUND A LOT"!./ What ya SCARED OF IN LIFE is get'n PAIRED WITH A GUY that aint afraid to shed a TEAR FROM HIS EYE/"... 10z EZ
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 00:01:00

read it twice! shit was ill
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 00:03:35

10 Raw
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 03:17:19

nice worth of ten peace
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 12:57:38

Deep Writtenz,Thats Some Real shit..respect the Rhyme..10 All week
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 13:34:27

Cyphers Hot...I Gave It A 10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 14:44:12

Can Relate this Joint, Nice Story Telling n imergry n Like how you flow unique n you dime it up nice
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 15:18:18

GOD FUCKING DAMN hommie.. ohh i've been with my girl.. well.. may 1st will be 8 months..and if she ever cheated on me.. omfg.. you dun even know.. Ateleron's fuckin crazy, I'd kill her.... but damn i'm feelin this so hard.. anything below a 10 and you're dumb.. best cypher in a long while...respect hommie!!!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 17:50:32

SIXKS SHIT MAYNEAK PROPS ON THIS PIECE REAL DEEP SHIT
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-16 18:59:47

Good shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-17 00:08:17

Hot Drop, I was waiting for the jail time part..I was like wher's it at??, like how you just put it in the end along with the climax, good closure. 1o.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-17 14:59:50

Dyme material EZ! Best 2 bars....She got me sprung, Now im CRAZY DEVOTED It was almost like she held a BLADE TO MY THOAT WHEN/ Her Voice suddently FADED WHEN SPOKEN, she said: “Im Really sorry, Its not your BABY IM HOLDIN"!!…/
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-17 15:21:59

Ten This is kinda something that happen to me fams
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-17 16:54:39

lol..10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-18 13:40:09

Definite dime from here...Lovin the story flow an imagery you used homie.......She got me sprung, Now im CRAZY DEVOTED It was almost like she held a BLADE TO MY THOAT WHEN/ Her Voice suddently FADED WHEN SPOKEN, she said: “Im Really sorry, Its not your BABY IM HOLDIN"!!…/ Now im like, "Please SAY THAT YOUR JOKIN(?)"....best part of the whole cyph right here....straight fire....Lovin it..Peace
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-18 14:35:18

gs
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-18 14:59:17

Appreciate tha ratings folk's...
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-19 09:40:50

hot shyt..............10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-19 13:39:51

I made my girlfriend read this off her cell. Lol, and I told her if she ever did a thing like this I would kill her. :)
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-19 20:57:20

YOUR ONE OF THA BEST MAYNEAK, YOUR LYRICS ARE FUCKIN UNREAL AND YOUR RHYMES AND SCHEMES ARE ALWAYS ON POINT.......SHAME YOUR WONT BE THA 8TH LEADER IN DNA REALLY HUH haha
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-22 11:59:18

really good, really depressing. lol
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-23 10:15:26

10.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-25 06:31:56

crazy shit, very convincing the emotion and everything, 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-26 22:46:46

i liked it . liked the emotions. every gurl will be happy if she see dat. i am ;) much love * 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-04-28 09:44:09

NICE DROP FAM!! PEACE~2~!
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-01 05:46:27

shits fucked up .....but this is a dim real talk
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-05 10:25:17

..good read
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2009-05-10 14:54:27

nice
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-10 18:26:39

Dope
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-11 18:22:52

hell yea thats whassup
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2009-05-18 04:21:35

Easy dime spot. This reminds me of my piece on UE entitled "Destiny for the Rest of Me". Don't know if you ever had the chance to read it while you were on there homie but the concept is very similar, only with a different twist on the end. Shit was a true story though. As for a critique: this was precise as fuck with the multis and flow and you held a good storyline from start to finish, which is what some of the best hip hop is made of. Good shit Mayn.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-19 01:33:47

damn..dude..you started out GREAT and ended it AMAZING..hottest text ive read on this site yet..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-21 00:40:11

fucking hottt real shit is it true haha hope not for his sake lol 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-27 20:07:55

10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-30 12:20:34

real emotion real shit dats wassup
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-31 12:04:00

lol this made me laugh.

Posted on: 2009-05-31 19:32:29

well done
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-31 19:39:36

oops...dime
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-05-31 19:39:53

Wow this is some real shit right here good flow and you came hard with the multies, nice read too you get a 10 from me
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-01 15:07:53

.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-01 17:14:15

damn u gonna murder that dude. shit u pissed fam? 10 ezz
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-07 20:28:48

lol id kill the bitch first then go after the nigga lol 10z easy lol

Posted on: 2009-06-08 03:03:56

Damn Good Stuff
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-09 14:14:51

DAMN thats some real deep shit may. Whats insane is the way you got it down like you did, not a lot of people could ever write bout this kinda thing n do it the way you did. EZZ 10
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-06-15 16:08:18

GOOD SHYT BRUH..
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-05 07:07:24

Nice.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-10 22:49:45

dope my nigga
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2009-07-11 19:10:22

you got dope rhymes sun..impressed. godly drop witta good rate
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2009-07-13 00:58:43

nicely done
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-13 12:58:04

good shit
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-13 16:55:35

dopeness. read and rate my own cyph which was s'posed to be a battle.
Rated: 9

Posted on: 2009-07-20 23:56:08

Yo dawg, thats some real shit out there man, that came from your heart dawg, and thats what mothafuckin rap is man. Life is a bitch and to be betrayed like that, while you try to amke a living and then your bitch sleeps with other guys, shit, dawg, I would be crying with happiness if I was about to have a child, but then find out it isent even mine....shit, I feelin ya dawg, keep the shit real.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-22 02:03:15

thats wats up
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2009-07-26 19:28:04

Good
Rated: 7

Posted on: 2009-08-02 04:20:24

nice ass cypher
Rated: 1

Posted on: 2009-08-07 10:33:02

lol loving this cypher i know what ya sayin its also the lol factor in parts nice work fam
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2010-07-07 15:53:50

10 H.A.M
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2012-05-24 19:21:09