YO TELL ME WAT U THINK BOUT MY FIRST WRITTEN I THINK ITS HOT AS HELL

Posted on: 2008-02-22 19:07:15

your beat is up too loud....try and write so that ure delivery can have a steady flow...your flow is off a lil...keep practicing..progress ion in session.. i remember my first time...i got the same advice

Posted on: 2008-02-22 23:39:17

hot shit yo, i just threw a written bout ma city down.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2008-02-23 12:37:38

TURN MA BEAT DOWN. LOL. stay high.
Rated: 10

Posted on: 2008-02-23 12:41:13

lol sorry if i messed it up
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Posted on: 2008-02-25 11:07:14

cooo
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2008-02-26 06:04:41

iight nice
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Posted on: 2008-02-27 17:34:09

OKAY
Rated: 8

Posted on: 2008-03-12 23:22:18