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Can a mod fix my html tags?
Thanks.
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Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 02:59:16
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First Bar was sick i Really liked it idk wat Gilthbar Rock is though im gonna Google it But still My personal favorite was the 2nd bar this wud be a DOpe Track this is Completley diffrent from your first cypher (Concpet wise)..Kind of Vocabulary still there Read the whole thing......and im sleepy
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 06:12:48
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i actually read this b4 and i just commented
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 06:13:02
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damn......10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 11:36:30
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nice spit again.....(10).....u skilled....keep it up
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 11:59:08
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Yo where did my other cypher go? "Requiem of Death"?
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 14:38:52
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damn u doin it
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 16:27:52
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on tha real fam....Welcome to S.G.U. & Spittage Inc. this could be a great thing for all of us...you definately got the talent where it's due...holla at me for collabo's...especial ly audio...check the tracks on my page, i got tons more if you wanna hear them...holla...100
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 20:22:31
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10 amazing spit b.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-02 20:53:45
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i cry when i read this cuz i kno what happened =/
beautiful piece
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 00:33:10
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Beyond The Demensions Of The Average Mind. 10+ .:KingMaze:.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 00:39:32
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Thanks for all the feed brothers and sisters.
Shout outs to my crew. Keep it live.
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Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 03:01:32
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voted 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 16:41:38
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Again with the multies! This cat is absurd! I love it man... very poetic language... really sensitive and passionate... and it's so clever with the prose... damn I'm a fan. No doubt...
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 17:09:29
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Ummm... this is easily another 10. You're an extremely gifted writer. No complaints ... seriously this is about as close to perfection as anyone can get. 10+
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 19:45:24
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very nice famz...u got sick flowz..my guy!
i vote 1000000,0000000000,0 0000000
SPIT*TECHS* ..
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 20:01:13
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after reading your other cypher i had to check for more!!! this was amazing again, real heart felt poetry, again, flawless multies, and not a single one seemed forced!!! now thats real talent!!! now, lets see if i can find anything else you have posted. heard you saying something about universalemcees or something, ima check it out!!!
good shit again man!!!
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 21:01:50
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CANT GET ANY DEEPER
If it was fate-from-the-start, then why did Fate put a stake-through-my-hea rt?
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 21:26:05
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nice job man 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 21:35:43
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.................... ................damn
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-03 23:30:39
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9
Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-04 01:30:32
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xx
Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-04 06:50:37
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dam u good sonz. anotha headbusta.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 07:25:32
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Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-04 07:49:18
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you kicked my ass in our battle but this was good shit
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 08:03:16
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deep piece
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 10:32:39
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deep touching piece here. great multis and imagery
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 10:36:57
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10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 10:41:01
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DAMN
this nigga deep. nice poetic vibe
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 10:43:24
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10 forshuree damn your shit sicks.
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 10:48:51
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10/10
''
I gaze-across-an-empty -sea, where-the-ocean-meet s-the-ragged-sands
these days-of-loss-have-em ptied-me, bearing-broken-dream s-and-shattered-plan s
wearing-open-seams -in-tattered-hands, the vestige of Our Creation fades-to-dust
I gave-enough displays-of-trust to wager-just a 'Savior's-Touch'
then tainted-luck made-it-rough and through the flames-of-lust my rage-was-such
that sadly...the *One Thing* I could never 'Save-was-Us' ''
whoa...verynni ce writing here man.. just sick..
''You were my Goddess-Aphrodite, but the Gods-sent-wrath-to-s pite-me
I can't 'plod-this-path-so-l ightly' when I bear this 'rod-and-staff-insid e-me'
Complications-of-l ust-divide-you, while promised-patience-an d-trust-abide-to~
search the 'stars in your eyes' for the constellations-that- must-reguide-you
to-choose-the-fan- that-can-blaze-these -lover's-deep-fires- which-fate-wronged
so that we may once again 'peruse-the-planets- and-bathe-each-other 's-desires-in-lake-d awn'''
deep man
great drop...keep bringin the heat
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 11:23:38
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*speechless*..10z
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 13:11:54
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nice spit! 10
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-04 16:43:45
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Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-05 07:06:11
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Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-08 14:15:06
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very poetic n deep
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-09 05:35:10
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gotta agree wit everybody else here
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-09 05:39:06
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Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-09 06:05:37
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OMG You Are The Best Ever To Step On LB Lol
VB Babesz
*Deucesz
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-09 20:21:18
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10 al d way
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-11 10:14:44
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straight 10 bro
Rated: 10 Posted on: 2008-03-15 03:20:12
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Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-03-25 09:30:04
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Rated: 1 Posted on: 2008-07-10 10:13:31
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