VARIOUSINTELECT u need to edit ya avy,than use capital letterz for ur rhymez,work on ur multy n punches,n do not decorate too much coz that can brake ur flow ya get me?
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Posted on: 2008-01-19 19:01:45

Bankz,u shud do tha same as well,
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Posted on: 2008-01-19 19:02:53

ok..i feel u on dat...but watchu think overall

Posted on: 2008-01-19 22:31:28

Hollow,u shud use tha space in da box dnt u think? look every1 i told u wot do to,send me 8 line wiff ya new style wiff decoration n stuff n if i c that u got betta i will invite ya,coz tha lyrics ain`t bad but u neva used capital letterz for ur rhymez blah blah blah
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Posted on: 2008-01-20 06:52:02

ok

Posted on: 2008-01-20 17:06:23