Nice drop, good luck bro. Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-28 02:53:18

One took it quite convincingly. Wonderbred you need to stop reading your lyrics off the screen also be a bit more energetic. It will automatically improve your delivery and presence. Cuz it is very boring to watch a dude sitting on a chair,just reading out the lines off the computer with no actual emotion. Whitz,you had some decent shit but a lot of your punches were hits and misses,your start was kind of sloppy but you picked it up towards the end. A tip-before actually recording your video,record your vocals on audacity and keep hearing that shit for like 4-5 times until it's stuck in your head. After that,you can go for video recording. Memorizing lines will also improve your presence because you will be looking straight at the camera and not at the screen. Hence the viewer will be able to connect with you and your verse in a better way. Fair is in. Voted: Wonderbred / WHITZ
Posted on: 2014-04-28 10:15:34

Im going to say one took this with the better delivery imo.. ones lines were better but he just seemed uncomfortable which lost the vote. My votes in. Voted: Wonderbred / WHITZ
Posted on: 2014-04-28 16:57:32

Ok here it is........both had ups & downs......wonderbre d didn't have the aggressive delivery you look for in a battle...but he got more comfortable toward the end.......and he did have very good lines......whitz had that aggression in his delivery......but... ...it sounded like a freestyle cypher as opposed to a well thought out written tournament battle.........im always fair when I vote.......its a combination of things that wins battles & in this case wonderbred had the better combination.....hope fully if bred makes it he will practice more and be more aggressive in his approach.......whitz if you make it hope fully you will bring s more complex verse to the battle field.....RESPECT... ......1 Voted: Wonderbred / WHITZ
Posted on: 2014-04-29 08:55:50

#Murda4Hire... Comment Only
Posted on: 2014-04-29 21:33:54

Good battle dudes.. givin this one up to whitz i think he had 1 up on u bred.. keep grindin tho Voted: Wonderbred / WHITZ
Posted on: 2014-04-30 10:02:12