ha ha good battle good battle.... Comment Only
Posted on: 2007-02-14 00:33:52

I dunno I dunno i read N re-read...then again....i'm mad i gotta choose on this but ma gut says pifffff...but i really want to see a round 2 cause i was feelin this 1...no h8 click back on ya mans Voted: MiKe ScArrZ / Pifffff
Posted on: 2007-02-14 17:34:38

dunno dunno either....who shood i bak gess yaz will never know......til da battle ends. Voted: MiKe ScArrZ / Pifffff
Posted on: 2007-02-14 20:49:46

good battle...keepin it real Voted: MiKe ScArrZ / Pifffff
Posted on: 2007-02-15 02:42:02

Ordinarily, I doon't say who I vote for but I think this was pretty clean cut. Scarrs, your verse was riddled with filler (the chucking a spear thing came out of nowhere, irrelevant to brreaking her heart unless maybe you say you're gonna impale her heart with it). Also, your first line was waaaay longer than the ones it rhymed with, even moreso with all the exclamation marks as caesuras. Also, what relevance has saying you're a thief got? If you said you were gonna steal a victory or her virginity than perhaps, but no. Also, you didn't even check the gender of your opponent. In future try to at least check out opponent's profiles. Still, for the most part you flowed pretty well. Meanwhile, piffff was coming with wordplay and imagery, and the flow was equal or perhaps even better (while there were less rhymes over all, there were more multi-syllable rhymes). Vote to piffff. Scarrs, try to work on the things I mentioned, you'll improve in no time, even if it means stretching your lines out a bit and making less rhymes, work on the actual punches and content of the lines. Please, fair votes back. Voted: MiKe ScArrZ / Pifffff
Posted on: 2007-02-15 07:20:32

Skooled Voted: MiKe ScArrZ / Pifffff
Posted on: 2007-02-17 01:29:15