first was just like rhyming words to mean nothing bro like u got the concept yea i get it but spit it legit n quick not benign lines

rhymed crime slime time nine line sign mime mine byne  just a tip?? unless ur playing then i didnt get it. its like ur trying to be really quite so ur compensating for sound with the mic in ur mouth.  

 i gotta go with #2 DC getting better with punchlines and shit i seen a few of yours n u seem to be taking the advice people was giving u. if u could fit more stuff n i think it be even better but definenitly funny the "G" bar was pretty good 

Both were aight. one brought it more powerful and with more attack. the other sounded mo written! anyhow fairs in

You guys have me rolling funny funny s*** keep it up different child one this one pretty basic pretty simple and easy but good stuff