Mister Jon Flako's opener actually wasn't bad at all. It sounds ever-so-slightly premeditated but you can tell that he was trying to rap something else with it but regardless it was a good concept. I actually really appreciate this particular freestyle just because I can ACTUALLY understand what the fuck MJF is saying this time even though he still typically slurred every now and then. It's actually not even that bad. He stayed very direct towards his opponent and conceptualized very interesting material within his verse. He came in pretty aggressively but he just needs to better compose himself and keep working on his rhymes.

Demon Rage had a much nicer delivery as his shots were pretty nicely landed let alone an also better microphone presence. Definitely not the most remarkable of all-time but it's not bad even the slightest bit. The responder stayed very direct towards his opponent throughout his whole verse with some fairly nice jabs too along with it. The consistency of shots I felt like were a bit more plentiful with the responde. He had a slight slip-up within the middle of his verse but still stayed persistant and made up for it with his cunning closer.

....That fucking gun line at the end tho....

Dunno if this guys new but still out rapped mista john with ease keep at tho bro. Good luck both keep at it guys

Fv

both kinda rambled a bit but at least demon rage directed his attack and had a few more rhymes in there flow was more or less even