Decent attempt from the loser there is no doubting that.. winner had the delivery and the flow that was more battle oriented here yO

Occam shouldve followed the format of his opponent, but u took the right approach against a verse like this, u were direct and attacked the first half but was a lil cypherish toward the end, was still enough to get the dub. Good attempt from Rapangel, I suggest writing more it will definitely help improve your freestyles. Another thing to keep in mind is to stay direct, continue attacking your opponent, its a battle. Last thing would be to lose the filler words, will be hard to do but it'll make ur verses a lot better, it's hard to listen to a verse when damn near every word is "fuck". Keep elevating tho.