young dem wtf was that LOOLOL no offence I just don't know if you're serious.. you got a 4 out of me cause at least it was funny lol ..Iamthenme the pauses between shit was killing me.. i know its free but its gotta transition better either way it was enough to win 

Just a note and it's no excuse it was a freestyle first time on audio and I was cooking 😂 but feed back is appreciated 🤜 

I got NME wth this one with a smoother flow, a bit more energy, and just harder more developed punches. Fair is in.

Young dem u basically chat some shit down the mic i failed to notice any bars or rhyme scheme ...your best line was " i wish my dick was as big the aefel so i can fuck the world for 72 ass " whatever ....NME not bad for your first audio bro ...u showed u can bring the   rhyme schemes  and set up punches  ok there were some pauses but was your first ever free so not bad man  Easy win for NME  FV in 

Though one dude was harder to make it out I have him winning this.. less pauses and his punches were more direct here yO