its not a free..its a half written i chicken scrstched down

0:06 - 0:09 ..... wtf happened? LOL

Nah but for real tho props to MJF for his consistency as well as his interesting vocabulary that he was able to conceptualize off the dome in such a way that it conveyed ever-so-slightly better jabs. I also appreciated how he comes up with all of the cool words he's incorporated into his verse this time especially since it all actually made fucking sense this time. The first half of his verse went the hardest. He wasn't the best at riding the beat but I still having this dude oddly enough edging this for the reasons I've stated.  

Guts, your opener to your verse especially at 0:35 - 0:43 very oddly reminded me of how ToniC 801 would go at it. This was really surprising for me though. Because you should be able to take an easy W from me in a freestyle whereas I can easily take the W from MJF. However, I don't feel like you edging this battle. You were really feeling yourself too much here; self-hyped to the point where your actual shots lacked in consistency. I also felt that the shots you laid on the table lacked in volume as far as heaviness goes. 

I can almsot see this going either way, however. Good luck to you guys! 

Flako would like to hear more writtens from u, it'll help ur flow more, highlights of your verse was the internal rhymin try incorperate some more punches u have some ideas next step would be to create set-ups from those ideas instead of rhyming just to rhyme, keep writing it'll definitely help. Guts freestyle flow is getting better, pauses were a lil too long tho. Giving this to guts, took the snipers advantage and was more direct. Good shit fellas. 

yup got guts takin this since jon already said his was a written (the this beat is dope opener btw...LMFAOOOO!!!) nice drop either way Jon and good effort Guts LMAO.