I gave this to Evil Twin because I felt his punches hit harder, and he stuck to a clearer and more effective narrative so it was all building on itself. I thought that the bars about working at the strip club were some of the smoothest and most well-delivered lines. Nowaypossible your lines were nice, like your opener, but often very simple, like in your opening when you repeated "brain" as the rhyme twice.

I don't know anything about the freestyle/written stuff though, so I hope I voted correctly here.

gb. both had bars

Haha, That was Funny.., .

Neither of these were really hitting hard for me. both were basically slinging insults rather than actual bars. my winner a couple lines that had some wit to it though. fairs in

lmfao. yo winner tooks this with better punchlines and consistency 

both need work..lolfv

half the people that drop "freestyle" battles as opens are written, especally as acapella. you being on this site as long as me should of figured that out by now ticket!!plus it was a blind drop, i wasnt taking my chances

Evil Twin had harder punches, a more powerful presence and cohesive delivery

Noway sounded a bit elementary with weaker punches and (rhyming brain with brain?) with a spoken word kind of presence and flow, still developing the style

ET took this one clear to me

fv in

I like this.. Punch count was higher on my winners side. Dope shit tho