Black your getting better, but your just on the level you need to be to compete yet. Barz with the easy W. 

I don't understand this emcee battle rap,alot of this was weak.

Loser's delivery was choppy in spots. Also there was less content in your verse with all the times you kept stopping. Felt some of your punches didn't land with as much sting, too basic at points.

Winner had the better flow and delivery. His punches were slightly more witty and he didn't stumble as much as the loser did. Overall you had more lines in there that I preferred though both lacked any impactful punches here.

one had to come down to the others level and losts some points...and the Rookie is at least shoe=wing us some respect by trying to Rap...Peace...