Second verse rap I like for the win gb

Wtf was that DOODOODODODODOEOOD

This One was a clear cut winner. BARZ, BROUGHT the heat. Fv in good battle

winner was more confident in his delivery and took control from the jump off, not the only reason he won, his verse all around better. If it hade been close though, emotion felt and portrayed sways my vote drasticly. So my tip is to (on a written ofcourse), practice it outloud a few times before you post, maybe even spit it to people around you. you'd be amazed on some of the feedback that helps dramaticly. Keep evolving your craft.....to my winner, props for icing it with a free(thats why only a 6,still good enough for the W), gb

I actually practiced this a few times and premeditated a lot before I went at it because I wasn't going to write for this crap but I wanted it to be good.