Did you write? Know dis was freestyle right? Its coo.. voters be brutally honest im trynna improve

Flaw got a nice multi scheme, and that grind wordplay was joke/ talgo you better at audio than text but that verse was kinda sus, you even write that or u reading someone else's bars?

all off the top im just joking hmmm  ..  still liked it.  gb fv next time free  

take it easy,just toking :)

I think one was written by the way he was breathing. That is an autoloss on this website

Both had punches one was rapping too fast and it threw me off i felt like ones approach and delivery took this advice to my loser would be to slow down so we can understand what your trynna get at fv gb