fixed ToniC 801 vote Posted on: 2017-03-05 23:21:03

WRITTEN BATTLE*** Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-03 10:27:40

Good battle yo Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-03 23:57:22

Yeah, Bro, Good shit! Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-03 23:58:32

some really heavy punches thrown by both in this one. i gotta piece full warrior line was dope and almost sealed the victory but i was turned off a bit by the rushed delivery. punches 2 my loser flow and delivery 2 my winner. quality battle fellas keep up the good work. Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 00:11:16

This shit was type close, Kinda expected more from one but with that being said i went with whos flow and punches were more consistent with less filler Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 01:22:59

though one was a tad harder n took it for me. its not peter its peet. lol Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 03:52:37

Tough choice here. Young conceited had the better bars and I thought peace had the better delivery. I am going with young and the better punches. In this case I didn't feel delivery alone was enough to outdo what young brought to the table. Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 15:28:02

this was tight as fuck. I feel like peaceful choosing to scheme his entire round probably led him down more paths of creating scenarios or extravagant displays of rhyme-ability instead of the traditional -setup- > -punch- style you get with more flexible projects that aren't limited to one scheme. Even still, the way you carried momentum through the verse was fire. Energy was not only present but interesting enough to overshadow some of the less impactful grasps you made. I think that had you included some more punchline type creative writing in the sense of playing with words or double meanings you'd have taken this with stride, but my first comments on the verse just limited you on that front I believe. Young Concieted had a more ups & downs verse content wise as while I always enjoy the flow & cadence you bring to the table, some of your concepts/punchlines need to be more set up and impactful. I feel like this is embodied in how your first really impactful punch came through at like the third concept set with the flash on punch, as the earlier ones had that hollow set up feel. Either way this was a total toss up, both of you guys are in the same area of skill I think at this point its just about topping yourselves and bringing dynamic evolving content to the arenas. No hate intended, good battle Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 15:31:07

I actually meant to give this to young conceited. I will contact a mod to remove my vote so I may recast it. Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 15:34:06

this was tight as fuck. I feel like peaceful choosing to scheme his entire round probably led him down more paths of creating scenarios or extravagant displays of rhyme-ability instead of the traditional -setup- > -punch- style you get with more flexible projects that aren't limited to one scheme. Even still, the way you carried momentum through the verse was fire. Energy was not only present but interesting enough to overshadow some of the less impactful grasps you made. I think that had you included some more punchline type creative writing in the sense of playing with words or double meanings you'd have taken this with stride, but my first comments on the verse just limited you on that front I believe. Young Concieted had a more ups & downs verse content wise as while I always enjoy the flow & cadence you bring to the table, some of your concepts/punchlines need to be more set up and impactful. I feel like this is embodied in how your first really impactful punch came through at like the third concept set with the flash on punch, as the earlier ones had that hollow set up feel. Still, I believe your differentiation really brought you to the win here. Peace did great, he just limited his punchability with the choice to scheme even though he did it well. Either way this was a total toss up, both of you guys are in the same area of skill I think at this point its just about topping yourselves and bringing dynamic evolving content to the arenas. No hate intended, good battle Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 15:45:16

both did real good here. honestly thought peace was taking it then he stopped short. FV gentlemen Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-04 18:04:01

about every battle you do is hotlist bro!! Worldwide! Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-04 22:25:56

Worldwide! Both were fire, good battle ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-05 00:18:02

damn really good battle young killing it //peaceful also killed it but not for a full min that was my only factor that i had to not make this a tie good shit both hope to hear some more Fv in Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-05 15:04:13

fuk i ment conceited Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-05 15:07:30

you could tell peace can spit fast he has good flow but didnt really keep me entertained with the bars Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-05 16:44:18

One was killing wit aggression. One was flowing n rhyming well fv in fellaz Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-05 18:14:29

Thanks Er'body, for the feedback! Comment Only
Posted on: 2017-03-06 15:02:40

gb both went in wit bars but one had a stronger flow Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-06 18:17:16

Dope battle. I thought both of ya'll did your thing in a different way here. Peace: I fucked w/ the entire verse being a scheme. That was nice. However, I felt the scheme limited your verse a bit though in terms of personal type attacks. Your energy and cadence were nice too. Some nice bars overall though. Young: I thought your flow/deliver was dope. You had more bars aimed at your opponent. I feel like some of your punches could have better set ups/creativity in order for your bars to really hit hard. You already have the flow. Overall I had Young Conceited taking this by a slight margin. Fairs dropped Voted: YC / PeacefulW4RRIOR
Posted on: 2017-03-06 23:16:01

Sik!