Fall to my similes. topple you lyrically. im nuts, you suck to the base, balls on your chin you aint a baller you little league. I'm gonna chomp on you dog, there is always an itch to feed. I bug out! bitch you better hop if you see me walk with the crips then flee. stoppin your heart if you cross my vicinity. if you walk in my yard and you talk like you hard then I'm droppin you instantly. Model of infantry. You probably call up the cops and then spill the beans. its not very smart to just talk to this wilderbeast. you aint got any will to beef or bars and delivery you gone cuz you oughta be off if you dissin me. nah... you're not listening you gone cuz! you oughta be offed if you dissin me. frost leaves you shivering. hop in your crib and leave your day gone, like the god of the philistines. speakin of gods who you talkin to when you speak? so try to give jay a L, You know that Jay ill. You know that Jay'll, stay in here hard slick back like i'm Gel. You'll never see Jay yield. if you try to serve a sentece to Jay youll, get these bars on lock like a jail. Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-11 15:53:07

Okay, SOOO since I've been doing this insanely complex style lately, and alot of stuff goes over people's heads, here's a little bar breakdown. The first scheme is what I like to call a double scheme. one side of the scheme is about you bein bad at rapping and a fag. (Nuts, you SUCK, balls on your chin) The other side of the scheme is about baseball. (Base--balls, baller, little league, and what do they eat at baseball games? nuts) The next is another double scheme. one side of the scheme is about crips. (Hop, and C-Walk) The other side of the scheme is about fleas and dogs. (Chomp on you dog, ITCH to feed, Bug out, Bitch, Hop, flea/flee) The next thing I did was ALOT more simple! (Cause, and cuz. Off if you dissin me, and Offed if you dissin me) It doesn't really need explanation but whatever. The next thing I did was just a simple simile. Leave your day gone like the god of the philistines. (Day gone/Dagon, Dagon is the main god of the philistines) The rest is pretty easy to figure out. AND I'M DONE BEING HUMBLE!!! NAME A RAPPER ON HERE WITH A PEN LIKE MINE! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-11 15:54:55

Btw the jail thing is a septuple entendre. Septuple means 7 Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-11 15:58:51

OH and this is the beat https://www.youtube. com/watch?v=a3EPuxNh L-w Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-11 16:01:41

I messed up the link. HERE it is https://www.youtube. com/watch?v=a3EPuxNh L-w Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-11 16:25:14

smh Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-13 00:09:34

wreck-em Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-13 00:37:09

Sendin shots and everybody wanna 'clap', but when he's 'gung ho' everybody gone get clapped when go go clllllllllllllack; like its SMACK ENTERTAINMENT; you fuckin fag youll CLAPPED AT ARIEGNMENT; body bags'll get TRASHED IN THE BASEMENT; fuck a morgue you couldnt afford gettin maked up; This fuckin fag, boi you WACK SHITS WAY OFF; fucked up flow and ya RAPS THE STAY SOFT; strippin fo dollars; YA ASS STAY WAY TOSSED; and me? I swing in the club; 'cept this CRAP AINT BASEBALL; faggot. Ill take the 'screw', slit ya throat and watch as ya parents; bawl/ball; Then when I Curve em, They look silly EXPECTIN THE FAST; and ya girl, Ill 'slide her/slider' in then 'change up' 'PALMIN' THAT ASS! Yo you prolly aint even get all of what that REALLY MEANS, Oh yea I forgot, yo ass tryna be 'major', in LITTLE LEAGUE. See, I really got this rap 'shit on lock'; Like my 'cell' when the WIFE AROUND; Cell Bleeps "WHIPE ME DOWN" Phone call? SIREN SOUNDS. Fuck around with the GOAT, youll get the horns; . This is my OBLIGATION to have 'bullets disfiguring ya body' like its OPERATION; First you 'pull out a tool'; then you HOP AWAY SON; Then put the 'medal to his sides' like hes constipated! bitch.. Classick ya bastards!~ Gung Ho= ready to shoot Swing in the club/Swinging the Club. Club=Bat Types of Pitches in Baseball: Screw Ball Curve Ball Fast Ball. *People look silly when thrown a curve ball and they expect a fastball.* Slider Change up Palm Ball Flipped his Jail and Rap on lock line. Cell=Jail. Cell=Phone. In the game operation you disfigure his body by removing parts. One part in perticular is a hammer thats inside of him. (Tool) Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-13 13:22:30

This...battle...is.. .fucking...amazing Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-13 14:13:59

damn slick throwdown, but like my winner said, "fuck with the G.O.A.T. you'll get the horns" gb Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-13 14:43:39

My winner got it. No h8. Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-13 14:49:49

It's a sad day for hip hop when battle rappers have to explain their bars for other battle rappers to understand them Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-13 18:08:42

Btw, a couple battles ago, like 2 days ago. I did a Cell=Jail/Cell=Phone scheme. I said "Bars like a cell. Now did I mean connections or corrections?" Hmm Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-14 07:54:39

Dope spar, both dudes did what they had too but one had a more attacking approach Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-15 00:49:59

gb nice Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-15 04:44:48

raw u had a nice scheme, but u were off beat and sounded ike u were more rambling on and talkin than keep a rythm to the beat,,you're delivery below par a bit and u coulkd maybe work on centrating ya punches more to stand out... overall,,not bad but could be much better,,no hate buddy..beezy u had a nice flow and delivery and ya punches stood out more than raw did,,im not a big fan of people flippin a verse unless its a live battle,,i was hopin to hear ya on beat vs beat,,overall you did pretty good asnd did just enough.. Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-15 17:25:36

both were dope - winner set the platform and should be followed imo both had good lines fairs in fv Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-16 00:10:58

1 was on fire here fv gb Voted: Jayvin / Josh Breezzyy
Posted on: 2015-12-16 06:53:07

classic battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-16 13:08:58

Good work on both sides. Props' Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-27 23:15:16

... and sorry I missed the chance to vote! Comment Only
Posted on: 2015-12-27 23:15:40