audio topical tourny - cheating death Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-07-29 23:13:14

Good shit NE! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-03 05:48:30

Life... What is life?/ Mines bout to end by knife/ Two bottles in, best believe I dived/ Drowning my sorrows with the reaper by my side/XXX Telling me to do it before the sun rise/ But how can I do it n not tell my sons bye/ He says don't worry, everyone dies/ You'll have anotha chance to look in ya sons eyes/XXX Tears drippin on my suicide letter/ Chicken scratch sayin I should've tried better/ Baby momma hates me, member the day I met her/ She couldn't stop smiling, now I make her eyes wetter/XXX Than a storm cloud, we just had a fight, n she she stormed out/ I'm worn out, tired of all these wars now/ N my kids witness the violence pour out/ Don't wanna put em through this anymore now/XXX My hearts been torn out, n death sounds peaceful/ This rooms so cold, seen so much evil/ It's also heard me say I'll never leave you/ With her reply, I don't believe you/XXX Good answer I guess, this blade looks sharp/ It'll drain the blood quick, from my broke heart/ My eyes open, n everythings so dark/ I'm bout to go where the lonely souls are/XXX All I gotta do is take death's hand/ Right now, he's my best friend/ Bout to put this life in the trash can/ Right now, I'm breathing my last breath in/XXX My reflection on my shiny weapon/ Lets me know I'm still here, n not in heaven/ Or hell, or nowhere at all/ Maybe it all ends right where I fall/XXX But then I'll never see my boys again/ My thoughts are scattering, so I put some more poison in/ Chug the bottle til I see the bottom/ This butchers knife's bout to solve my problems/XXX Mind raging, I feel caged in like a prisoner/ Where'd that bitch go?!? Why am I missing her?!?/ I envision her, and everything we once had/ Now we're a broken family, n I'ma drunk dad/XXX Fuck this shit, press the blade to my throat/ I black out, my plans have been broke/ Wake up to my kids smiling at me/ Asking, why u on the floor daddy?/XXX I smile back at em, tell em don't worry/ Thankful I cheated death, he won't be back in a hurry/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-03 05:59:25

Hmm this is tough. One's story was better but I felt one's flow and delivery was smoother. Leaning towards the story, though cuz they picked up flow and delivery was towards the end and weren't that far behind in the category anyways. Good battle, guys! Voted: Boss-MC / Wigsplit
Posted on: 2013-08-03 09:14:47

nice work fam Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-03 18:13:28

Cool battle ,felt ones storyline was more consistent ,close battle Voted: Boss-MC / Wigsplit
Posted on: 2013-08-04 00:47:38

gb Voted: Boss-MC / Wigsplit
Posted on: 2013-08-05 15:54:10

This was close. I felt both could have done better with how they developed the stories though. The flashbacks and introspections sort of made things hard to follow. For example, in NorthEast's piece, I didn't feel there was a good transition between the time he got into an accident on the highway to the time where he was in heaven. With Wigsplit, I felt the flashbacks could have had a better basis within the story. It just came across as random thoughts he was thinking while he was in the room contemplating suicide. Either way, I'm voting for the story I slightly enjoyed more. Fair's in. Voted: Boss-MC / Wigsplit
Posted on: 2013-08-05 22:27:36