Don't, h8/Cr8~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-29 23:06:47

gb Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-30 13:43:08

Magi: no h8 but in all honesty maybe you should just write your verses instead of coming off the top because I can tell your just trying to find words that rhyme and work on being more clear you sound like you are whispering Catast rophe: I like the delivery and how you rode the beat you put thought into your verse and it paid off Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-30 16:04:23

Like Joey said Magi or you can write it down in your head before you spit and also speak up and put more aggression in to your bars... But really you should write your shit so you can produce more creativity in your punches.. -Catastrophe- You had a nice flow and threw some nice punches and had some cool metaphors.. Your delivery was cool also... Overall decent battle. Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-30 16:10:15

the 2 expos above pretty much sum up what i have to say. one was quite impressive, had that beat on lock with consistent delivery. the loser, at times, was hard to really understand what you were saying, ur bars wernt constructed too great probably cuz it was completly off the top. Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-30 18:48:37

fair is in Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-30 19:25:49

Man i should really just keep doing me.. . Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-31 11:21:02

You can keep doing you and probably keep getting L's. They're not saying that in hate, they're saying that as someone that knows about spitting...you have to be on point on that freestyle shit..either think of your up coming bars ahead of time before you say them, or write. Not every one can freestyle Dope. Just saying. 1 got this because I could hear them better, and because they was on point. Voted, Fair. Do the same. Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-31 16:20:43

gb fv Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-03-31 18:37:54

magi you got some really good advice already..a good way u can practice is picking a topic , like a movie you like, then just try to rap about the plot of the movie the characters names etc if you have a subject matter in mind that your brain can pull content from it makes it easier to get that flow going.it sounds to me like your having more trouble coming up with concepts and subject matter more so than actually rhyming words-@catastrophe you def won this, but i really would have like to hear specfic shots, punches that pertain just to the opponent, maybe some flips of his bars..btw respect magi for dropping open after open if every one put em out like u this site would be poppin Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-04-01 09:47:23

nice flows - Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-04-01 14:37:09

i say you both turn it up a bit -- not the volume -- but the emotion - wheres the passion -- the heat .. i said it time and time again ,, Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-04-01 14:38:02

Voted: uheheu / -Catastrophe-
Posted on: 2013-04-01 23:12:17

oh Thx for the comment's~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-02 00:12:14