Bless s mess. long after my Death~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-28 00:47:26

fun 2 battle someone who doesnt write shit. good times magi. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-28 01:34:53

Magi - This is a battle and you took awhile to actually start throwing punches at your opponent.. You WAY TOO MUCH self talk bro so cut back on that... Also when attacking your opponent be sure to throw in some metaphors in there as well and work on your delivery some what.. Get more hype and speak up.. You also sounded a little uncomfortable so work on that.. You got a nice little flow there now just throw in the shit i told you with it..... Anon0mys - Your verse was a little entertaining.. Anyways you attacked your opponent nicely but you could have thrown in a couple more creative bars..Your delivery was alright but could be better but this was pretty good for a freestyle... I dont know if your coming directly off the top but if you are then you shouldnt.. Try writing it on a pad in your head before you spit it and as your spitting if you can... Overall this was a decent battle.. Voted: uheheu / Anon0mys
Posted on: 2013-03-28 12:01:01

MAGI you had a nice drop but you took a while to get into throwing some hits out. needed to seriously be more clearer with your words! nice drop though Anon0mys you had a real nice solid drop, your punches hit alot more and you were direct, needed some more creativity but its a freestyle :) good shit guys! fv Voted: uheheu / Anon0mys
Posted on: 2013-03-28 13:34:21

Fair vote... nohate, one had the flow... vb fair Voted: uheheu / Anon0mys
Posted on: 2013-03-29 14:23:53