.G/b, Voted: Anon0mys / skinEC~RRR~
Posted on: 2013-03-15 00:45:35

Alright 1st and foremost, neither one of you should be freestyling cuz this was not a good battle at all.. Yall need to work on deliver.. Anon0mys, you sounded like your parents were sleeping and you aint wanna wake them and SkinEC, you were a little louder but had no type of aggression within your bars.. Next , Both of you lacked creatvity.. I know this aint text but yall still gotta set-up your punches with relevant metaphors or references.. Yall were just throwing weak punches, one more then the other.. skinEC when you said your swisher because your too sweet wasnt good but you got the right idea... swisher sweet blah blah now you need to convert that into a punch to attack your opponent with some creativity but too bad honest the concepts is weak to start with but you could of said something like you can roll up n get smoked like swisher sweets.. See where im going? Thats an example of setting up your punches... This goes for the both of you.. Yall both need to work on delivery, yall need to be more hype and aggressive.. Yall both need to set-up your punches like i showed yall but with fresher concepts.. Yall both need to write instead of freestyle.. This are some basic tips..My choice threw more punches and was in attack mode.. Overall not too good of a battle.. Voted: Anon0mys / skinEC~RRR~
Posted on: 2013-03-16 06:11:33

ANONOMYS- first off seems your mouth is way to close to the mic, too many breath noises hinder your delivery, punches were a bit stronger although got a bit tedious when you kept referrin him as a gangsta and flippin it on him..,flow was ok, yours sounded alot more freestyle.i'd say work on throwin some similes or wordplay metaphors to strengthen your punches.. SKIN-beginning was hella too mellow for a battle verse,also, i wasnt feeling the long pauses in between bars , it picks up tho afterwards, flow timing was choppy towards the middle, due to amount of words you were tryin to fit in one line, thats something you can work on, is lose unnecesary wording that throws off your delivery.. setups were poor, keep the idea to your punches cohesive, ex. would be you talkin bout his girl, then ends wit callin him a parody... this is called irrelavence in your build.. anyway, i got my winner wit slightly stronger disses.. fairs in. Voted: Anon0mys / skinEC~RRR~
Posted on: 2013-03-16 06:40:03