this is written... not freestyle.... SMDH!!! get this fixed or most people will vote against you Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-03 10:04:24

not even gonna vote on this.... one guy posted a written as a freestyle and the other is a cheater.... SMMFH!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-03 10:54:09

elevator with the raw free Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-04 02:19:48

okay... had to listen twice, true menace had a few particular concepts i liked.."shoot the wings off a fly" and "Kurt Cobain" but the delivery wasnt executed nicely..at some parts it didnt ryhme, possibly just the ryhme scheme switch up...keep battling and you will find your flow... Elevator, came in with a classic beat, few funny lines but nothing hard hitting.. dope freestyle and the drop sounded good..lacked punchline's tho this is rap you always gotta pack them punches...Concealed vote may the better man be declared victor...(FVC Keep it 100#) Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-04 06:19:23

Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-04 13:43:46

?/? boo Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-05 23:21:25

True Menace- I wouldn't suggest saying "I'm a cute dude" when you're in a battle. But I felt your drop was filled with played lines and your delivery was off point. But then again played or not you actually had some punches. Even though the concepts and wording were extremely basic. e.g. "Leave your brain spread like a rumour","I don't carry tools but you can still get fixed". So lots of basic and corny lines. You have potential though. Try to think of more creative concepts and build on that with harder hitting punches...but this being a freestyle battle i'd let you off on that. However work on your mic presence. You sounded monotone throughout the battle. Put some aggression into it to convince your opponent you actually mean what you're saying. Elevator-I noticed you only focused on flow...probably why you decided to use an beat verses an accapella open. You had no punches. 90 percent of the battle you spoke of yourself. "i'm a scary cunt". Lol well try to actually scare your opponent using some substance in your bars. "I got hairy boobs,hairy feet". Trolling isn't going improve you're rap game. Both need work. ONLY CONTRUCTIVE CRITISM. FV Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-06 00:50:06

Cosign Veto and Chemist. Voted: True Menace / Elevator
Posted on: 2012-10-06 08:08:13