fv Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-09-30 19:29:12

fv Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-10-01 04:36:36

Elapse, a lot of the words you rhymed were easy and played out schemes like "emasculating, evaporating." You had a nice touch with internal rhymes at a certain part, but it seemed like you were more focused on having the scheme occur frequently and some of your enunciations sort of ran into each other and were unclear. FiNAL WoRD, the way you dragged your speech in certain parts wasn't working. I'm sorry. It also sounded like you freestyled whereas your opponent brought a written. I just felt one brought a little more to the table here. Fair is tossed. Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-10-03 12:53:37

Elapse, For a written I was honestly expecting more for your Wordplay. Your creativity was there no doubt, but was lackin on the delivery of your punches. Overall was a nice drop Just try to work on your angles abit more ya digg. Final It sounded like u were freestyling in this battle abit? I could be wrong but for a written it would be more stable. Creativity and presence was there but was expecting to here a more completed drop. Good peice though pimpin no doubt. FV IN Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-10-03 14:23:33

Accidental vote removed. Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-10-03 15:49:41

Thanks NOBLE!!!! FV IN Voted: Elapse / FiNAL WoRD
Posted on: 2012-10-03 16:59:25