YAHALL BOTH SAY NIGGA 2 MUCH Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-27 23:27:57

Illyiceent: you say fuck way to much.. a good way to brake that is just dont cuss in your flow for a while... real talk it makes you sound uneducated when you cuss... you also need to work on you flow and punches.... for flow try spitting on beat that you know the lyric by heart to.. and just remix it for a while... and to get your punches.. i would try writting and intertwine that in to flowing on that beats you know... Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 00:31:26

Annoumous: you tend to say fuck and nigga a lot i guess i could say a up side to you is you found your flow... now you need to get your rhymes down... i would just say... "See Above Comment" so since you say Fuck and Nigga so much... i would go back to a basic rhyme and run with basic one word multi punches for a while tell you broke saying those words over and over again because taking them out might just brake your flow because it seems like you fall on them to keep your flow up.... writtens really help with that for the fact that if you dont write it you dont have to say it... Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 00:41:43

Battle... you both need to drop some stuff... but with both of you not having punches i will have to really vote this off the flow and entertainment.... Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 00:47:12

gb Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 06:15:14

ILLyiCeENT: Your mic is low. Get a better mic. I felt you put alot of expression into your verse which gave you an advantage...plus your delivery was on point. You made a lot more sense. It was not bad at all for a freestyle. You didn't stumble over any words even once.At some parts I felt you weren't directing shots at your opponent but it was an open battle of course. You did have some basic punches in there...Just focus on more complexity...but after all it's a freestyle. So solid joint here. Annoumous- I didn't like the fact that you chose a beat to go against an accapella verse. Your flow was ok at some parts but you tripped over your words with the beat a few times. I feel like you just focused on your flow because you had no direct punches at your opponent and alot of it seemed like random filler. Fairs in. Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-30 13:21:26

Thanks for the honest feedback, I never expected that, I am new to flowing again, was in jail for a while, just got out started again. I will take your advice to heart and try it out. Plus this was like my first flow since forever, no warmup, and I was pretty smashed. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-30 15:48:19

i heard one over the other..no h8 Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-30 19:49:20

to me my voice sounds too loud, i have really loud speakers that reach 140+db n ya this mic is shit Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-31 10:13:16

good b yh one Voted: iLLYiCeENT / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-31 17:51:43