gb vishus ;vicious is the correct spelling of your name ,lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-27 21:52:11

LOL@THE PAPER TURNING 00:04 AND 00:26 IT SAY FREESTYLE YOU LOSE Voted: Vishus D / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-28 00:09:13

the paper turnin at 0:04 is the beat cuz its the same sound on both emcees.....with that im going forth assume no prewrites here...........VISHU S- you got great energy when it comes to the spit and presence u seem very confident but only problem im coming into is the lack of punches since you trynna spit horrorcore style.....i love horrocore but really doesnt do to well in freestyle battles and also near the end seems to feel like your falling off a bit so you jus start throwing "mother fuckers in there" you got great potential and jus need to maybe work on ya craft a bit throw in more punches...its hard goin first in an openin but punches with meta will help out alot for that....jus peep battles from audio hall of famers and you'll get the jist of it......ANNOUMOUS - your punches are basic....need to bring more energy and presence BUT you did come out swingin upon ya opponent with punches and attempted nameflips which what battles are all my bruh......just try reading a dictionary for vocab building and jus bigger words in everyday conversations so they'll come to you naturally which will bring in multis alot easier and throw some more metas in there and you'll be straight my dude.....OVERALL kinda even battle with each side lackin a bit of this n that....but also they did a great job as going forth with battling and flowing......we all need work......keep ya chins up and practice guys....OH AND THE PAPER SOUND IS PART OF THE BEAT.... Voted: Vishus D / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-28 09:16:35

yeah when i first heard that paper sound i knew somebody would of thought i wrote it ,thanks for the real feedback blocc Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-28 12:38:42

Vishus - You Came In With Great Energy n' Presence, Being That This Was A Freestyle Battle, I Won't Be So Harsh On Ya Barz, As Your Flow And Everything Was Good But That Lack Of "Strong" Punches Is Your Weakness In This Battle. I Say Exercise On The Creativity Of Your Punchlines Instead Of Just Aiming With Aggression n' That Murda Murda Kill Shyt. Good Luck Fam. Annoumous - Gotta Have More Of A Presence When U Spittin' Fam, I Felt Ya Delivery Wasn't As Strong As It Should Be. You Edged Ya Opponent Wit The Punches But On Your End Lack The Energy He Had...In Text Its Bars Wins But When It's Audio... Presence/Delivery/Ba rs Are All Key Factors To Win. Work On Delivery/Swag n' You'll Do Just Fine. This Was Freestyle So I Felt You Did Pretty Decent Job. FAIR VOTE IS DROPPED: This Was A Close Battle Where One Had What The Other Didn't And Vice Versa...I Rolled Wit Who Had The More Direct Bars. Voted: Vishus D / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 02:06:47

gd battle certainly no h8 homies Voted: Vishus D / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-29 12:18:47

gb fv Voted: Vishus D / Annoumous
Posted on: 2012-08-30 19:16:05