yeh its just one of those days Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 17:18:25

so u just said fucc the beat, juss go acapella next time! i mean if u gonna use a beat,.....us ethe damn beat! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 19:10:11

yo you battling or what yo fuck the criticism niggi spit you game Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 19:13:52

this mofuckers open like your mouth right now haha Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 19:14:18

no hate niggi just real talk you know the 1 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 19:15:15

bnb Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-25 21:20:32

swag~ & lyrics are betta no hate fvn Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-26 00:44:35

oppz ment to put 8's Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-26 00:45:04

this guy digs ur swag bro. u should PM him. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-26 05:36:41

toppa, you were all over tha beat, and were goin too fast to catch everything you were sayin, if your speed is going to affect your quality then you should just rap at a slower pace,also your lyrics were mostly ALL one word(ground,sound)tr y rhyming at least two words togetether( big bitch, stick shift) then when comfortable add you'd like,also you didnt have alot of punches, ghost- you rode tha beat good and had some decent lines but nothing to make somebody impressed, you already know how to make words come together nicely now just focus on concepts and unique ways to say tha same thing everybod else sayin.battle decided off better wordplay,slightly better concepts and delivery. Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-26 14:00:48

Gotta give it to Toppa... He was on the beat like a mufucka Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-26 16:44:43

Revo dece spit. 204 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-27 04:50:18

Toppa-- You could have been a little more aggressive and spit slower but your delivery was still somewhat decent with the exception of the quick spitting. Also another issue i heard was the lack of creativity. You didn't really use any metaphors or similies which help with complexity and another thing was your choice of concepts weren't good either so try throwing in some metaphors with some good concepts and spit slower and you'll see some improvements and one last thing, you didn't really speak to much about yourself but still do less talk about yourself and focus more on attacking your opponent with creative punches GhostRighte r-- Your delivery wasn't all that strong and you really didn't provide any hard hitting punches and also lacked creativity. You flowed nicely but that was about it. Just like your opponent you need to focus more on attacking instead of talking about yourself and also your concepts need to become more complex and provide more metaphors. I see potential in the both of you but you both need to work on certain aspects at the moment. Both can feel free to PM me if you have any questions. Overall this battle was ok but had a good amount of flaws that could be taken care of in no time. Voted: toppadeheights / AP47
Posted on: 2012-08-28 13:24:18