Good to see you back Lyp. Fairs in. Posted on: 2012-08-24 17:50:03

blow ya self up with a home made bomb u fuckin wak job Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-23 22:43:51

Spirit why the long pause ?? wow you totally could have took this if you didnt stop and rap about how beautiful he was. 8 to 6 not hate honest rate Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-24 02:59:54

gb Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-24 04:36:25

what lol you win Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-24 23:30:39

Lyp: i can hear Lyp is a lil rusty with some basic punchlines... your verse kinda missed the wow factor...PureGoodSpi rit: well clearly this was premed or written at first..then switch up to some basic multi freestyle... but your not dissing your just cypering.. no punches at all really... and the 15 sec pause didnt help your case much... also if i was you i wouldnt repeat the same word over and over again unless you have a really strong punch at the end of it... Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-24 23:37:58

omfg Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-25 00:15:01

fly w/angels Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-25 00:16:15

4 sho! Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-25 11:33:24

lyp=not really alot of advice to give because you are freestyling, but i would like to see you use more complex rhyme schemes and pick up tha tempo cuz its obvious your capable of it,- spirit, you didnt rap you recited a poem. tha whole format and sound of your verse was poetic not battle oriented at all.you didnt fill your time fully, and your lyrics were mediocre wit NO punches or insults.not really much advice aside from that can be given to help you until you drop a RAP verse and let us hear where you're at. Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-25 12:51:59

gb.lol Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-25 17:28:56

Lyp killed it... Nice lyrical content cuz... What was spirit doing??? That sounded like a poem not a freestyle Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-26 16:47:22

LYP keeping it real Voted: Lyp / PureGoodSpirit
Posted on: 2012-08-26 21:42:51