kartoondmv got this Voted: kartoondmv / ghettonomical
Posted on: 2012-08-21 11:08:17

Kartoondmv: need a lil emotion in ya verse you dont want to sound monotone and you wasted a lot of your time that doesnt help... Ghettonomical... need to work on ya punches and not sound like your just talking.... i went with the person that filled there verse Voted: kartoondmv / ghettonomical
Posted on: 2012-08-21 18:08:20

both of you need to work on your cadence, even though you are rapping acca there should still be a rhythm to it, kartoon you need to think more outside tha box, and use ALL your time, anything else makes it look like you aint really want beef, ghetto i liked that me comical but your a cartoon concept but you aint even rhyme your first 3-4 bars, kartoon would have won if he would have used all tha time Voted: kartoondmv / ghettonomical
Posted on: 2012-08-21 22:53:14