AQ 9-11 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-31 00:44:44

bnas no hate but your just dry yellin wit no purpose. if you would only get crunk on key parts it would sound alot better.just sayin...fv no hate Voted: G-moe / Bnas
Posted on: 2012-07-31 01:07:01

G-moe-Your flow is above average really got a nice rhythm going in this one but barwise you really lacked punches infact i dont think i heard a punch throughout your entire verse.Your cadence needs some work also but you got alot of potential just need to get the fundamentals down.For improving id sit down and learn to construct punches and setups on paper as a written and then venture onto the freestyle side and try and throw them in the mix.For cadence instead of reading off a paper memorize your lines and add some emotion to your voice it will strengthen your verse and make your lines hit harder when punches are thrown bnas-Flow was ok not the best but not the worst neither.Had a few ok jabs nothing really bodybag material.Your delivery was meh,You seem to think that yelling throughout your entire verse is a better delivery approach............ ..its not.Improvement wise id just keep freestyling to yourself at random and you will only get better with practice.With the yelling tone it down a bit use it to emphasize certain points where the punch is delivered in your verse to make it felt that much harder.Overall Both of you have got potential in the right mentors hands could even be mid to top tier.Keep grinding fellas Voted: G-moe / Bnas
Posted on: 2012-07-31 20:15:18

fv gb vb Voted: G-moe / Bnas
Posted on: 2012-08-01 02:50:39