bizzy 01..I know its a freestyle but no line was original at all and you were off beat alot of times and the lines were not hard enough to matter if you were on anyway.... drasti-k your delivery is on point and I got a few dises towards your opponent it still sounded kind of like a cypher styled verse in certain aspects...keep elevating guys fair vote is in Voted: bizzy 01 / drasti-k
Posted on: 2012-07-31 19:53:56

Bizzy - You were rhyming very simple, one word syllables and sometimes not even at all. I liked this beat and felt you could of performed/freestyled a little better .. Basic concepts and nothing really stood out .. Stay grinding.. You'll learn from experience. Just slow down and say what you mean ..Also paraphrase or shorten up alot of those run on lines. Drasti-k - One thing I think you could improve is .. Not alot .. You were on point ..Flow decent, Mic presence was above average. I've never heard you before.. You seem comfortable in your environment . You should work harder on punches and throw more aggressiveness towards your opponent and that will always be a good factor to bring to the battle. No toss up here I'm throwin fairs Voted: bizzy 01 / drasti-k
Posted on: 2012-08-01 00:43:12

thx guys for the advice i appreciate the constructive criticism and will work harder at going harder Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-01 10:46:10

gb no h8 Voted: bizzy 01 / drasti-k
Posted on: 2012-08-02 23:56:18