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Posted on: 2012-07-30 16:11:43

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Posted on: 2012-07-30 19:04:35

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Posted on: 2012-07-30 21:49:55

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Posted on: 2012-07-30 22:40:08

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Posted on: 2012-07-30 23:40:57

Man.. shiii wasn really close imo. Not much to detail. Both jus keep Improvin in what yall do Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-07-31 00:10:44

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Posted on: 2012-07-31 00:30:46

gb fairs in Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-07-31 11:05:28

come on boys Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-07-31 13:25:16

expo:passifers, baby rattles, baby rattle snake, toddler are first few punches add up the osh kosh bgosh( store where they sold baby clothes but there chains are fading away//curbside dinner, take out, aussie cheese fries, bloomin burger= name of menu items on restaurant menu STEAKHOUSE that is located in east pittsburgh/ rap you in a microwave from instabul(instant bowl) to turkey(both countries or food that ya microwave/out for the count like dracula( count dracula off seasme street that counts numbers) to my sixty seconds//rest is self explantory////////// ///i met to leaqve expo yesterday but as i was doing so the power went out..nice battle josh////just tryin to leave a better understanding to my bars in case they go over people heads.idk though....... Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-31 14:57:21

Ight decent battle here. Josh: You had some nice concepts like the "chinese dishes" and "blast a whole through the air/ear" punches. But I think you need to liven up man, your delivery is weak. Don't be scared to put some emphasis into your bars; It sounded like you was just talking. Other than that I liked your writtens, good shit. ... Flako: You sound like Edward Norton lol. I liked your lyrics, you def had some nice ideas. Im'a say the same thing to you as I said to Josh though, although your delivery was slightly better than his, you could still try putting more emphasis into your bars. All in all it was a nice battle, both did their thing but Imo one had the better set-ups and punches. Fairs in, good luck to both! Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-07-31 19:18:52

fv no hate but mister jon flake had more disses vb! Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-07-31 22:26:25

cool matchup here see you still putting in work flako good shit.... fv in guys Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-01 14:18:20

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Posted on: 2012-08-01 15:47:40

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Posted on: 2012-08-01 18:17:08

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Posted on: 2012-08-01 21:24:48

aiight Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 01:37:39

niice fv Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 09:43:11

JOSH: Delivery was okay, Up and down alot... around the 35 second mark is an example. I could tell you were reading. Try spitting your rhymes a few times and practice before you drop that. If you can memorize the whole thing before the drop would be even better. You don't want to sound anybit monotone or like your straight reading what you wrote. The overall flow as decent though. Felt you could have been more aggressive tone wise with your punches. The lyrics of the drop for the most part was nice and consistant. Some of the lines I've heard before, like the "lickin of the envelope" line I actually think you used that in one of your text battles... But overall you got the writing part down, just work on the the delivery and presense you bring while dropping it.... Mister: Delivery was decent and you flowed well. Felt you can tell the difference in audio experience here. You had some dope concepts , not much I can say you did wrong in that area. Obviously you can always bring harder punches, and I felt you could have worded some of what you had differently for a smoother sound and to be more effective punchwise but you were consistant and you threw them equally to what he brought. Overall I think the punches were about equal in this battle, it just came down to the audio experience. Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 13:53:54

Josh: You got some nice punches, but you gotta work on your presence. I need more energy out of you amigo. Jon: It's a little hard to understand you, try to speak more clearly and work on your punches a bit. Keep it up guys. Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 15:10:21

delivery took this hands down JOSH you sound like a robot but im not hating on your lines keep elevating...jon flako nice delivery lines were not the best but your delivery helped elevate them fair vote is in! Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 15:29:08

Fair vote is in... Voted: mister jon flako /
Posted on: 2012-08-02 15:52:58