Here we go this is the start, breaking you down, to fall apart, sick with bars, this battles ours, ill make your red like planet mars, ill cut you up and leave some scars, red and dead like this is jaws, hear that noice, that is applause, for me not you, not santa clause, just listen close to what I say, like predator you are my prey, i'll chop you up like childs play, you'll decay and drift away, vision going black a grey, bring you down like boxing day, no delay, your puree, every word you'll obey, everything that I say, on this day, dont stray away, just back up, I dont really give a fuck, you already suck, so i'm just gonna rep a tux, fuck your swag, wave your flag, before youre in a body bag, you fucking fag, i'll tie you to a puching bag, hit you hard, leave you scarred, then i'll call your sick when bared, in a room full of dust, when your crushed with lots of rust, you can rap if you must, but you'll just be a bust, you have no way to adjust, so this is it my fist will thrust, the last punchline, i'll break your spine, because your battle has been declined. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-27 03:54:10

dawtye,,too fast but for a prelimnary battle,,not bad,,bars came in direct in battle form,preety solid,,,high 8s Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-27 11:20:54

okay I feel like Dawyte could have slowed it down a bit. Its not always about how fast you can spit, its also about content. Whats the point of going fast if its hard to understand. SIck- with-bars had a better flow, and a little more clarity, but also you need to work a little on not stopping too early both really good battle though Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-27 14:26:15

Dawyte came hard but needs to slow down... feels like your trying to fit too much in, even though your lines were hot. Sick, elevate your vocab... your lines are a little basic. no hate Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-27 15:17:52

Dawyte your alot better on a beat... but i think u writing these weird... slow it down forumlate setups an punches so we can see the point u making sick your shit was ok punches a lil basic this bout elevating good shit guys Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-27 22:25:59

not bad, gb. both were really good dawgte needs harder punchlines , Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-28 02:04:54

...D tempo is everything. it allows u to project tha build up n pun in a manner that will hit harder than jus rushin thru. Take ya time formulate ur bars from a-z with rhythm and ur pun will roll off like crack sweat. S-W-B... U dont sound toooo confident with what ur sayin... how can u intimidate ur opponent n u an intimidate'n yaself.. u gotta dig deep wen u in tha ring. Yall gone be 100... keep at it. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-28 07:06:24

slow it down as everyone said D. i like the flow tho and the lyrics. sick you had a few question mark lines, wanted a lil more energy overall ok. the fair is in. decision made. Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-29 00:11:14

fv gb vb Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-29 02:36:42

ok ive noticed with sick- that he uses the same lines in alot of his battles-and thats the ps3 game line..ive heard u use that before..flow was smooth but all the punches were not there... dawte ur punches were alright but like everyone said u gotta slow it down..good battle fair is in Voted: Dawyte / sick-with-bars
Posted on: 2012-07-29 13:23:32