GG. Any suggestions 4 improvement as a first battle? 

was typing dis rap from a phone and sht got deleted then i forgot sumn so i put it semi verbatim. Only then I forgot to refine 1 or 2 lines. hate when that happens lol.

OK.

quaedd-you had some nice set ups and lines in there. excessive filler in my opinion but overall i was feeling the punches.

DifferentChild-Felt like you started very slow, picked up a little in the end. You had fewer solid punches..so the edge IMO goes to quaedd..fair is in

This is a mother fucking close one . I read twice.  It could go either way honestly but I felt like my winners verse was slightly smoother and stronger conceptually 

My winner rhymed the basics better then his opponent here.. the rhymes and the punches from one were dope and creative here

Quaedd u have the basic understanding of how this works.. make sure your readers understand what your saying cuz sum times your concepts don't come out how u envision them..your punches fell flat mostly becuz of bad wording and execution..but overall this was decent...u could be a top tier one day if u out in the work.

DC u had broken multi issues straight out the gate, also a lot of wording issues...who pops tomatoes?? Who says that?? Tomatoes get squished or squashed..one off word can make a big difference in your bar. You got a good flow and u can rap..just figure out wat kind a writer u are, and build around that..study sum good vets material, put it all together and create your own style. Keep at it!

Idk, Q's punches just hit me more than Diff. Both are talented though but, Q just came out with a stronger beginning and ending. As of opponent, keep doing what you're doing. If I were you, I'd work a little more on the content wise. I read it and just felt too many people kinda said similar things to it already. Like for example, "It's on now u BETTER BE READY, I'll leave u stretched like WETTER SPAGHETTI, FREDDY," This just felt, Idk a bit mediocre. 

I can tell u ain't hood brick repper. U must've not heard yukmouth stunt 211. Domination said pop guns nigga u wouldn't pop a tomato. Now if u don't understand something ask before voting stupid. 

Naw I ain't hood ..I got popped like tomatoes..lol so u admitting to stealing bars from Dominaton...if you gonna quote/steal somebody bars make sure it's lyrical..or at least worth it..

Oh mister I think I'm lyrical More than anybody else. Be humble before I humble u. What u know about aks and ar 15's? I guess u wouldn't know what struggle is. U probably were born with  a silver spoon in ur mouth. Some of us can't afford shit like u.